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2012年12月英语四六级写作技巧之简洁才是美

  词语简化的一些技巧
  ² 策略之一:用介词短语替代从句。
  例:
  Wordy: While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
  Better: During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
  Wordy: When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
  Better: At the second traffic light turn left.
  ² 策略之二:删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词,变从句为短语。
  例:
  Wordy: The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
  Better: The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
  注:把句中的”three parts”改用形容词来表达,节省了四个不必要的单词”which is written in”。我们经常可以将关系代词如”that”去掉,这只会引起少的变动。
  ² 策略之三:剔除你不需要的单词
  "Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call. "
  写完这样的句子后,你自己再读一遍,挑出单词”joint”和”telephone”,注意删去不必要的词。
  ² 策略之四:表达否定意义时,尽量避免使用否定词。英语中很多词不用 "no’s" 或者"not’s"也能表达否定含义的词汇,你尽可以采取更为委婉的表达方式。
  例:
  Thus college students who do not have sufficient financial backing ,
  也就是 college students who lacks sufficient financial backing。
  如果你不想使用太多的否定词,就应该尽量避免使用它们。

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