2014年湖北成人学位英语作文范文
Living in Big Cities or Medium and Small Cities?
(1) 大学毕业后有人选择留在大城市发展，有人选择去中小城市生活
(2) 在大城市和中小城市工作、生活的利弊
(3) 我的选择及原因
专家支招
这是一个说明利弊型的题目，探讨了大学毕业生就业选择的问题，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：① 段简要说明这一现象，即有人毕业后选择留在大城市发展，有人选择去中小城市生活；第二段具体说明在大城市与在中小城市工作、生活的利弊；第三段说明自己的选择及看法。② 写作时注意文章结构清晰，思路明确，可适当使用表示并列或递进关系的词组，使文章衔接自然。
讲师点评
Living in Big Cities or Medium and Small Cities?
① We can not choose where we were born, but we can choose where we live during the whole life. ② That’s why after graduation, some students want to stay in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai, while some others might long to live in medium and small cities like Yantai and Ningbo.
When referring to the city they’d like to live, different college graduates have different choices. ③ Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient. ③ In addition, they believe that their horizons will be broadened and their potentials will be fully exploited before so many challenges. ④ However, there are a large part of people choosing to live in medium and small cities. ⑤ Firstly, less pressure there will make them live much more comfortable. ⑤ Secondly, the air is fresher than big cities. Therefore, it will be beneficial to their health.
⑥ Personally speaking, I’d rather choose to go to big cities because personal development ⑦ rather than comfort is what I have been pursuing.
Analysis
① 描述背景。
② 表语从句描绘出大学毕业生的不同选择。
③ 分三点详述留在大城市发展的优势：更多机会、开阔眼界、开发潜能。
④ 引出相反的观点。
⑤ 层次分明，结构清晰。
⑥ 表达自己的观点。
⑦ “而不是”。
举一反三
Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
a. Some think that big cities are their favorites for the reason that there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
b. Some hold on the opinion that big cities are their favorites considering there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
(1) 大学毕业后有人选择留在大城市发展，有人选择去中小城市生活
(2) 在大城市和中小城市工作、生活的利弊
(3) 我的选择及原因
专家支招
这是一个说明利弊型的题目，探讨了大学毕业生就业选择的问题，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：① 段简要说明这一现象，即有人毕业后选择留在大城市发展，有人选择去中小城市生活；第二段具体说明在大城市与在中小城市工作、生活的利弊；第三段说明自己的选择及看法。② 写作时注意文章结构清晰，思路明确，可适当使用表示并列或递进关系的词组，使文章衔接自然。
讲师点评
Living in Big Cities or Medium and Small Cities?
① We can not choose where we were born, but we can choose where we live during the whole life. ② That’s why after graduation, some students want to stay in big cities like Beijing and Shanghai, while some others might long to live in medium and small cities like Yantai and Ningbo.
When referring to the city they’d like to live, different college graduates have different choices. ③ Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient. ③ In addition, they believe that their horizons will be broadened and their potentials will be fully exploited before so many challenges. ④ However, there are a large part of people choosing to live in medium and small cities. ⑤ Firstly, less pressure there will make them live much more comfortable. ⑤ Secondly, the air is fresher than big cities. Therefore, it will be beneficial to their health.
⑥ Personally speaking, I’d rather choose to go to big cities because personal development ⑦ rather than comfort is what I have been pursuing.
Analysis
① 描述背景。
② 表语从句描绘出大学毕业生的不同选择。
③ 分三点详述留在大城市发展的优势：更多机会、开阔眼界、开发潜能。
④ 引出相反的观点。
⑤ 层次分明，结构清晰。
⑥ 表达自己的观点。
⑦ “而不是”。
举一反三
Some insist that big cities are their favorites because there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
a. Some think that big cities are their favorites for the reason that there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
b. Some hold on the opinion that big cities are their favorites considering there are more opportunities for personal development and more modern facilities that make their lives wonderful and convenient.
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