2014年湖北成人学位英语作文范文
Tradition and Modernization
(1) 有人认为传统文化应当尽可能保留
(2) 有人认为牺牲传统文化来发展现代文化是值得的
(3) 我认为
专家支招
这是一个阐释对立观点型的题目，文章讨论了是否应当牺牲传统文化来发展现代化的问题，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：①段阐明保留传统文化的作用和观点，第二段说明传统与现代化的冲突并权衡利弊，第三段提出自己的观点。② 写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接自然。
讲师点评
Tradition and Modernization
The process of modernization today is even greater than before. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made ① at the cost of tradition. Many people believe that tradition should be reserved to the largest extent. On the one hand, they think that the tradition is the ②cream of history with perfect conclusion and abstraction, and thus it should be followed. On the other hand, we should keep our own traditional characteristics as a culture, so that we can find our own position in a world of ③ diversity.
However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization. In the first place, they view the history as a④ linear course moving forward, and outdated concepts must be timely eliminated. In the second place, they believe that civilization is more important, and should be realized ⑤ at all costs.
As far as I am concerned, we should sort out the universal truth in our tradition and stick to them. But we should also selectively put down some traditions for a better life.
Analysis
① at the cost of表示“以……为代价”，可以用于表示牺牲某些东西来实现目的。
② 可以用cream来表示“精华”，可以指人或物，表达简洁准确。③ 表示多样性的时候可以用diversity或者variety。
④ linear一词可以用于描述一切线性或单向发展的过程，在描述与时空相关的内容时也可以使用。
⑤ at all costs表示“不惜一切代价”，可用于强调话题的重要性。
举一反三
1. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
a. It is inevitable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
b. It cannot be avoided that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
2. However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization.
a. However, some people believe that it is worthy to abandon tradition for modernization.
b. However, some people believe that it is rewarding to abandon tradition for modernization.
(1) 有人认为传统文化应当尽可能保留
(2) 有人认为牺牲传统文化来发展现代文化是值得的
(3) 我认为
专家支招
这是一个阐释对立观点型的题目，文章讨论了是否应当牺牲传统文化来发展现代化的问题，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：①段阐明保留传统文化的作用和观点，第二段说明传统与现代化的冲突并权衡利弊，第三段提出自己的观点。② 写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接自然。
讲师点评
Tradition and Modernization
The process of modernization today is even greater than before. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made ① at the cost of tradition. Many people believe that tradition should be reserved to the largest extent. On the one hand, they think that the tradition is the ②cream of history with perfect conclusion and abstraction, and thus it should be followed. On the other hand, we should keep our own traditional characteristics as a culture, so that we can find our own position in a world of ③ diversity.
However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization. In the first place, they view the history as a④ linear course moving forward, and outdated concepts must be timely eliminated. In the second place, they believe that civilization is more important, and should be realized ⑤ at all costs.
As far as I am concerned, we should sort out the universal truth in our tradition and stick to them. But we should also selectively put down some traditions for a better life.
Analysis
① at the cost of表示“以……为代价”，可以用于表示牺牲某些东西来实现目的。
② 可以用cream来表示“精华”，可以指人或物，表达简洁准确。③ 表示多样性的时候可以用diversity或者variety。
④ linear一词可以用于描述一切线性或单向发展的过程，在描述与时空相关的内容时也可以使用。
⑤ at all costs表示“不惜一切代价”，可用于强调话题的重要性。
举一反三
1. It is unavoidable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
a. It is inevitable that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
b. It cannot be avoided that some achievements are made at the cost of tradition.
2. However, some people believe that it is worthwhile to abandon tradition for modernization.
a. However, some people believe that it is worthy to abandon tradition for modernization.
b. However, some people believe that it is rewarding to abandon tradition for modernization.
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