2014年湖北成人学位英语作文范文
How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?
(1) 酒后驾驶已经成为危害公共安全的重要因素
(2) 如何限度地防止此类问题的发生
(3) 我的观点
专家支招
本文对于酒后驾驶这一社会热点问题进行了探讨,主要讨论如何防止此类问题的发生,是一篇需要提出解决方案的论说文,写作时应围绕提纲进行构思:① 段提出酒后驾驶现象及其危害,第二段提出自己的解决方案,第三段总结自己的想法。② 写作时应当注意措辞准确、结构条理、正确使用衔接句。
How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?
Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals. ①The miserable tragedies have demonstrated that drink driving has become a serious problem harmful to the public security. ②Therefore, something must be done to prevent such things from happening.
③ First of all, corresponding laws and regulations should be made to clarify the definition and penalties of drink driving, so that the fear of punishment may pull drivers away from alcohol. Secondly, the administrations and media should actively promote the modification of so-called ④ “wine culture” to avoid compelled drinking, in order that the drivers may say “no” to the toast proposals. Last but not least, the inspections and monitors of the government and the society should be reinforced to immediately identify drunk drivers and prevent drivers from drinking.
In conclusion, it is the responsibility of everybody to reduce drink driving to the minimum. ⑤ Only when the problem is efficiently controlled can we live more safely and comfortably.
Analysis
① demonstrate常用于阐明现象,引出主旨。
② 提出观点,something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。
③ 提出建议。corresponding laws and regulations, pull...away from均适用于解决问题类作文。用alcohol指代饮酒以避免重复。
④ wine culture“酒文化”,有中国特色的固定表达。
⑤ Only位于句首时主句采用部分倒装语序,注意从句采用正常语序。
举一反三
Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
a. Recently, it has been tremendously reported that there are lots of accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
b. Recently, many reports are released on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
(1) 酒后驾驶已经成为危害公共安全的重要因素
(2) 如何限度地防止此类问题的发生
(3) 我的观点
专家支招
本文对于酒后驾驶这一社会热点问题进行了探讨,主要讨论如何防止此类问题的发生,是一篇需要提出解决方案的论说文,写作时应围绕提纲进行构思:① 段提出酒后驾驶现象及其危害,第二段提出自己的解决方案,第三段总结自己的想法。② 写作时应当注意措辞准确、结构条理、正确使用衔接句。
How to Prevent Drink Driving From Happening?
Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals. ①The miserable tragedies have demonstrated that drink driving has become a serious problem harmful to the public security. ②Therefore, something must be done to prevent such things from happening.
③ First of all, corresponding laws and regulations should be made to clarify the definition and penalties of drink driving, so that the fear of punishment may pull drivers away from alcohol. Secondly, the administrations and media should actively promote the modification of so-called ④ “wine culture” to avoid compelled drinking, in order that the drivers may say “no” to the toast proposals. Last but not least, the inspections and monitors of the government and the society should be reinforced to immediately identify drunk drivers and prevent drivers from drinking.
In conclusion, it is the responsibility of everybody to reduce drink driving to the minimum. ⑤ Only when the problem is efficiently controlled can we live more safely and comfortably.
Analysis
① demonstrate常用于阐明现象,引出主旨。
② 提出观点,something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。
③ 提出建议。corresponding laws and regulations, pull...away from均适用于解决问题类作文。用alcohol指代饮酒以避免重复。
④ wine culture“酒文化”,有中国特色的固定表达。
⑤ Only位于句首时主句采用部分倒装语序,注意从句采用正常语序。
举一反三
Recently, there have been tremendous reports on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
a. Recently, it has been tremendously reported that there are lots of accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
b. Recently, many reports are released on accidents caused by drink driving and controversial sentences of criminals.
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